Tuesday, 3 March 2015

Omaru Creek

WALT: Write a detailed introduction with hook orientation.

Our polluted dirty creek. Years ago the creek was a nice place to play and swim in. But now that people have littered their rubbish and cigarettes in the creek, it has now made it dirty and yuck, and cannot be used to swim in. What can we do to help keep clean Omaru Creek.

Learning Description: Our task is to write a detailed introduction about Omaru Creek.


  1. Nice detail of the creek Inez, I like how you described you story of the creek. Hopefully the creek can be the same as how it was before, with people playing around the creek. Keep up the good work.